Posted January 28th, 2013 • 10 commentspermalink

When I first heard that Grandpa Hank died, I didn’t want to go to no funeral.  But Mama said that kin is kin and I reckon she would have just turned my backside sore if I hadn’t gone.

“Besides,” she said, “they’re divvyin up the fortune.  You want yours don’t you?”

Well now the way I saw it, Grandpa Hank’s treasure was gonna have to go around a mighty large circle before it ever got to me.  Not that any of it should, being the most time I ever spent with him were a few games of backgammon in his kitchen.  Those are good memories of mine, with Grandpa showing me how to play then teaching me to trash talk the family.  He’d kick around at the hollow floor boards and tell me about Aunt Tilly and her drinking, or Uncle Horace’s gambling problem.

When me and Mama got to Grandpa Hank’s old cabin, every swinging dick that had ever known him was there.  Musta been two hundred people spillin out onto the porch.  Thank goodness Mama knows how to talk her way through a crowd, and we got ourselves two seats up front.

Sam the preacher got up by the fire place, reading off a long list of names and items.  I watched Mama get some old jewelry and a Winchester rifle.  Uncle Horace and Aunt Tilly got things too, before stuff started going to folks I’d never heard of.  I was near the bottom of the list, paired with the backgammon board.  My heart was pounding as I walked up to Sam and took the old mahogany set in my hands.  I sat back down and opened it up and let the round polished stones cascade through my fingers.  I pooled them on the soft felt of the board and picked them up to do it again.

When the room around me fell into a hush, I knew they were waiting to hear about the gold.  But I was too excited about my board to care.  Grandpa Hank had remembered me, and that was plenty.  Wasn’t no need for me to go and get greedy.   I had just picked up the hand carved wooden dice when Aunt Tilly shrieked.

“What do you mean there’s no gold?  That’s the only reason we’re here.  The rest is junk.”

Well, I don’t know what Aunt Tilly got, but I certainly didn’t think my board was junk.   I gripped the dice thrower in my hand, turned it over once and felt a tickle run up the palm of my hand.  Turning the small wooden cup over, I pulled out a slip of paper stuck inside.  Without moving my head I stared down at my lap and saw one word written in the same chicken scratch that Grandpa Hank used to keep score with.

Floorboards. 

About Louie Wilkerson

Louie Wilkerson lives in Portland Oregon where he imagines what he wants to do with his yet unearned fortune. Splitting time between school and work at the YMCA, he enjoys a good science fiction story, or really anything with a twist.

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  • http://twitter.com/erikarneson Erik Arneson

    Fantastic story, Louie. I play a lot of board games, so I really enjoyed that element, but it’s a great story regardless.

  • Brian Panowich

    Awesome slice of Hillbilly noir right there. Well done.

  • http://www.facebook.com/people/Rose-Green/1291166214 Rose Green

    Nicely understated. Good old Grandpa Hank!

  • http://www.facebook.com/isaac.kirkman Isaac Kirkman

    Second what Brian said. Great Hillbilly Noir, well done Louis!

  • http://www.facebook.com/john.thompson.18659041 John Thompson

    Nice story! Read this a few times already and its a nice and tight story. Really loved this one.

  • http://www.facebook.com/bill.baber1 Bill Baber

    having lived in oregon for over 20 years, this could have been set in the far reaches of some of them hills… great story.

  • Louie W.

    much appreciated guys- no better way to make a monday than some nice feedback

  • Bruce Harris

    A feel good story to begin the week. Terrific! Thanks.

  • http://www.facebook.com/zach.wilhide Zach Wilhide

    I enjoyed this one. Good work!

  • http://nevadaroadkill.blogspot.co.uk/ Chris Leek

    Great job Louie!

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