Walking out into the woods there was no moon overhead to guide him. Bumping into the trees, he wound his way deep into the forest, tripping over roots that herniated through the dirt. The darkness wrapped around him and he went on walking, the gun dangling from the end of his right hand, and his legs kept moving. He thought it would be easy to give up now that everything is gone—the money spent, his job an echo, her essence reduced to a figment. It should be easy to just roll over and die. He found that at the center of this forest, the depths of his own morass of fear and remorse, that maybe he didn’t want to do that. There was a rustling in the bushes, a flutter of wings, and something expansive spread out against the dark sky, black on black, no discernible shape, only the feeling of movement and a sense of great speed, a brush of wind on his face, and he tried to breathe again.

About Richard Thomas

BIO: Richard was the winner of the 2009 "Enter the World of Filaria" contest at ChiZine. Some of his credits include the Shivers VI anthology with Stephen King and Peter Straub, Murky Depths, PANK, Pear Noir!, Word Riot, 3:AM Magazine and Opium. His debut novel Transubstantiate was released in July of 2010.You can find him at his Facebook Fan Page, Twitter and his blog.

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  • http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=547377830 Paul D Brazill

    Wonderful, dark, writing.

  • Sabrina Ogden

    Nicely done!

  • http://www.whatdoesnotkillme.com Richard Thomas

    Thanks Sabrina and Paul, I appreciate the kind words.

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  • AJ Hayes

    I like the feel of this. The expectancy. Like the universe has paused for this guy, this moment, waiting for the ball to drop with a click or a gunshot into its slot. Whole lotta story inherent in just a few words. Cool stuff, man.

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  • davidjameskeaton

    The excellent fiction here lately keeps reminding me of great songs

  • Chris Rhatigan

    Very finely tuned and detailed writing. Fantastic work.

  • Nik Korpon

    Excellent work as always, Richard. Love the quiet tension of it.

  • Joyce Juzwik

    This was amazing. So much tension and emotion in so few words. The despair of one who has nothing left to lose. Superb.